The Prompt: Re-springing Your Step–Tell us about the last experience you had that left you feeling fresh, energized, and rejuvenated. What was it that had such a positive effect on you?
The Answer: Two months living on the beach in La Manzanilla really did leave me feeling energized, relaxed and a bit nostalgic. I posted some words and photos earlier here and here and here. Below is the rest of the story:
That good old salty sea air combined with grainy sand
defined my beach vacation and went great with being tanned.
Felt great under my bare feet and squished between each toe.
And left footprints behind me, wherever I chose to go.
It crusted up my toenails and powdered all my floors.
Seeped into my keyboard and creaked up all my doors.
It told the upstairs neighbors when I’d gone and got back home.
It sneaked into my ear canals and caked up brush and comb.
In spite of all the nuisance of the sand within my bed,
those memories of beach life still swirl within my head.
Yet I needn’t wax nostalgic, for I find behind each knee,
in pockets, luggage and the floor—the beach came home with me!
I will like to be at the beach
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me, too, but it is nice to be home as well.
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Nicely done! Love the line…”left footprints behind me wherever I chose to go”
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Reblogged this on lifelessons – a blog by Judy Dykstra-Brown and commented:
Want to support this new Weekly Prompt site. The prompt today is “Home” and you can find a link below.
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I love this, Judy — yes, the sand does come home with us, even from a day at the beach!
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I realized after I posted this that that was not the prompt word. It was just the label of the page! Dumb, dumb. So I deleted it, but thanks for reading it first.
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Haha — it’s still a fun poem!
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You’re right, so I reposted it. See what a good influence you are?
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